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Research and Planning: Level 2 15/20  PLEASE DO NOT CHANGE MY POSTS WILLIAM.
There is proficient organisation of actors and locations
There is proficient research into similar products and a potential target audience.
There is a good level of care in the presentation of the research and planning

To progress to level 3, make sure you have explained how your research impacted your decisions (for example in your audience profile posts, explain how you intend to address the potential target audience in your opening 2 minutes).
You must ensure you complete a storyboard, along with scripting, photos of props and costumes, shot lists.

Production: Level 3 49/60
There is evidence of a proficient level of skill in the use of the following:
Using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer
Producing material appropriate to the target audience and task set.
Using sound with images (use of copywrited music)

And evidence of an excellent level of ability in the following:
Controlled use of camera, variety of shot types and close attention to mise-en-scene